Just One More Night - Comments

One shot for one shot game.

Aw, I really liked this, it was really sweet without being corny and over-the-top. Your writing style is good too. It's not too descriptive and wordy, but I could still picture everything so clearly, and you can really feel the emotions of the characters coming through.

The background picture really suited the story, too. His face! omgno: Poor Ryry. :arms:

Well done!

One Shot for One Shot Game. :)

I'm not a fan of Panic! at the Disco, but I still thought this story was cute. You're a good writer. Although, I did have to use the default layout because the layout you used for the story made it hard for me to read. The font blended with the picture. You might want to consider changing the font color or the picture. Just a suggestion. :)

Awh. heh. I almost cried. I love this. And I'm not a big fan of het fanfictions. But, you may have changed my mind.

aww, this is so cute!! i love your stories so much

aww i like it its really cute.
brendon shoudlve just shut his mouth already. btw,where did you get the background picture? i cant stop staring at it -_-