Teenage Riot - Comments

Kyra fucking rocks!

I have to admit I am a bit of a dumbass though, so I do get confused at times. Either way, I love your writing. I love "me" in this. x3

Ahhhh Johnny's POV chapter caught me
And it’s as far I am right now
But I had to stop comment

I had so many things I wanted to quote and say I loved but I had too many
Especially this poem

"Kill your. idols
Sonic death
It's the end of the world
And confusion is sex”

Wow, I am SO anxious for the next chapter! Wow, you inspire me.

That was a great story...every line was so poetic and deep. I loved it...please write more?

That was a good chapter. It perked me up [I was falling asleep with all this crap on here. Lol.]
I must say, I was basically singing in my head when I read the lyrics.
xD

sweet dancing jehova! You are so very, very talanted!

yeaah I suck at grammar D:
but thank yah

Sorry it took me so long to comment, I've been a little busy trying to update. Lol.
anyway!@
Great story concept. Very original. Your descriptions were also very amazing. I could see everything and feel the characters emotions. Once I started reading, the other thing that stopped me was my tiredness. Lol. The only thing wrong that I saw was spelling errors. Other than that, it was very good.

:] really?

Wow, this is amazing.

yay. non mcr story with a AWESOME story line.

I'm only like a paragraph in, but your language is beautiful, and i like how it's descriptive, not dialogue.

Good job, i'll read the rest tomorrow.

ur story was great write more n thanx for the pm

Hey ppl pliz read and comment