Caroline's Keeper - Comments

HEY. You redid the layout! And I'm just seeing it now! It's really cute. You have mad skills.

Ooh! Will she hide??
Write more soon!
xx Emma

Yaaay, long chapter!

I like Eivon. He's kind of charming. XD

I chose b, turn right. This is soo cool, interactive story, reminds me of the goosebumps books. Love it
Great chapters btw, I didn't read the other two, lol.
xx Emma

Oooh, this was really cool, what you did!! I love how you made it like those books where you choose your own fate. That's so cool!

It makes me wish I could write stuff like this, but I'd probably just end up confusing myself along with the readers.

Oooh, yay. I'm glad you wrote more of this story. I like it. And I really like Eivon. ^^ Aaannnddd I'm digging the new title and character name you got going on.

This story is awesome, I love it! Love, love it, love it, love it, okay I've said that enough.
Please write more soon.
Oh and you might want to fix your note, it still says her old name.
xx Emma

Yeah, I like this story. You writing any more of it lately?

I think you should post another chapter.