This chaotic mix of different handwriting continued throughout the whole paper and it looked as if fifteen different people had randomly taken turns writing on it. - I just love that so much :') It shows off his crazy personality with how it's like his schizophrenic kind of :') Loved the quick update :D
The Joker Blogs pwn :') I wish they updated it more often though. Anywho, awesome update, loved the length and the content :D I liked how she didn't feel comfortable wearing heals or showing too much breast. I'm glad you updated :)
If it actually means anything to you, this didn't seem filler-ish to me : )
"Who are you trying to impress?" I heard Mitch and I looked over at him. He didn't look happy and I knew what he was thinking. "I mean with the purple and all," - I kind of feel bad for Mitch. For having her blantantly lie to him and everything with the face paint and shit and now the makeup. I hope she doesn't get in too deep with Jokey.
A low, throaty chuckle came from the man under me, the sound magnified in his chest, and I felt him start twirling random stands of my hair with his ungloved fingers. - Holy shit i think I just died a little. I loved that bit, it's just so... real! Ugh I don't know! I'm hyped and your update has made me happy XD Loved it as always :D:D
And when you did the Bright Eyes reference I was like 'Was that on purpose? I hope that's on purpose. Yay, it got pretty!' And now in my mind the Joker has that miserable young man voice that Conor Oberst has. :)
I don't think it sounded forced : ) And I liked this chapter with how Jokey was still rough with her yet still caring. And the whole avoiding eye contact thing. I hate it when you have to force yourself to write, it's like permanent writers block on certain stories : ( Happy birthday for three days though!
helloo! i havn't yet read your story but i've read the description. and i just had to agree with you. cause i've read -the nameless- joker story too. and it was frikken amazing. like out of this world. and then it got deleted. i was like nooooooooooooo! life's a bitch :( heh but i'm off now to read your story :D
Lovely update (: I like how she doesn't know if shes dreaming or not and how the Joker is with her like with how he calls her Jill. However I have the urge to sing the nursery rhyme everytime I see it O_O I hope you get some ideas soon and manage to update (: