So after reading Fake Plastic Trees, I remembered that you wrote this particular story on here, which is one of my all time favorites ever on Mibba. And I think that you should most definitely update whenever you get the chance because it's beautiful but is leaving me (and I'm sure all of your other readers) in suspense of what's to happen next. D: :3
Gosh, i love this story. Its original in its own way, because ive read one or two other 'blind frerards', but this is brilliant. Plee....*insert infinity more 'e's*....eeez update!
geez, i'm completely absorbed!!!!! this is really different to what i normally read on mibba, and i LOVE IT!!! can't wait for the next chapter, pleez keep updating :)
I've been subscribed for a while but have been too lazy to comment. :XD So I'ma comment now. :weird:tehe:
This is definitely my favorite mibba story. There's so much about it that I love. Part of the reason may be that my favorite color is also dark blue, so I was like "Hey. I like that color. Maybe this will be good." :tehe: It's' incredibly adorable.
"Don't know," Gerard shrugged, chuckling, "maybe it was my mother, she made sure that my brother and I always used our manners and folded our underwear." :tehe: I just wanted to say this if my favorite line so far in the story. It's light-hearted and cute and just gah. :tehe:
The story is written perfectly. I love it. :cute: Update when you can? :arms:
edit; :cheese: -didn't think to look at the username of the person who writes this- Woah, I completely didn't realize this was written by you Teddy! Ah! That's awesome. :tehe: So I'm going to say while I'm adding this that you're a spectacular writer. :arms:
New favorite story. I admit I came on here wanting you hate you 'coz you didn't appreciate my Adam Lambert theme xDDDD But then I found this. Thought it was gonna be cliche, but it was so far from it.
Certainly one of the most creative stories on Mibba. And perfectly well written. You've made a fan out of me :]
Really good. It's cute, and very well writtened. Different, it's different. I've never read a story about a blind person, anyway. It really got to me, like, deep. I think it's deep. I'm sorry if I don't make any sense, but yeah...
I think you should continue; with a first chapter as good as this, the story will turn Famouse.