Beyond the World - Comments

i like it!!!!!!! more????

i like it!!!!!!! more????

i like it!!!!!!! more????

lol, I was thinking that the subscriptions weren't working but guess what? Dumbass me forgot to subscribe XD
Im so special, therefore I love my special buddy's story

Aw, that was so sweet
Me liked it ^_^

Is that a real restaurant??
I like the name.

She said pie. Pie pie pie.
WHAT KIND OF PIE?!

I'm done, I think. =D

YAY. <3

OH HI.
I like this, mhmm. Originals are spiffy. =]

OKAY, so. I'm a freak, naturally.
But I have an urge to... spiff up your story a bit. (I'm a spelling freak, of all the ones to be.)

Alright, so, chapter 1:
'I mean common, do you really expect ME to wear a dress and high heals?['/b] come on, heels
'...listening to they’re iPods- like I am.' their. I think there are to many their/there/they'res. xD

Done. You can ignore my comment now. =]

OHWAIT!! And, 'only about 150 people in it' there's about that many people in my school. Well, maybe twice that, but yeah. xD

I like it!
I'm thrilled to find out what happens, you have to update soon