City of Blinding Lights - Comments

are you going to do a sequel?

Aww, Nina!

I'm a sucker for a happy ending.



I love how you rounded it all off, tying up any loose ends that there was.

At first, I thought it was all going to go wrong, with Caleb jetting off to America and never seeing Audrey again.

The scene at the airport was so sad, with Audrey willing herself not to cry, but she does anyway.

And then it's all okay, because Caleb gives her a pass to Warped, and we know that its not over.

I loved the finishing words. "...where their story would start again". They were a beautiful way to end it.



I loved this one.

I'm sad it's ended, but happy it ended happily.
It wrapped it all up very nicely and it wasn't cliche. Cliche would have been Caleb staying with Audrey or Audrey randomly jumping on the plane with Caleb.
I've loved every single part of this and it's refreshing that it was set in Paris rather than the usual England or somewhere in the US.

Audrey had only nodded with a weary smile as she pulled one of Caleb's jumpers, that she had accidentally on purpose shrunk
:tehe: favourite line of the finale.

You've done a really good job with this, Nina. :cute:

I was 'aww-ing' out loud by the end of that.
That was really cute.
I love all the description, and it makes it even more realistic as you've been to Paris, so you know what everything looks like and stuff. It's really helpful when you want to imagine what everything is like, and makes it less vague.
I can't believe the next one is the end. I'll miss reading this.

Aw I liked this chapter. :D

I'm glad you're back for a bit and can update!

I've missed this story.

Its got such a beautiful storyline and Caleb and Audrey are really sweet together.

I know that this is really shitty feedback, but I'm zonked and just wasted all my energy exclaiming noisily about an email I'd received from Oxford :tehe:

I love that she doesn't want him to go, it's like the two of them are a half of the same person.

I also love Caleb's dependence on Audrey, it's really sweet and the fact that he has her number on speed dial is insanely sweet.

Amazing update. I just wish that my feedback was amazing too.

Well, I just found this yesterday and I was all skeptical because I've never read a Caleb story, added that I'm not a big FTSK fan, but I thought this was really good. It had an interesting start, and I'm going to catch up on reading.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this. :]

Aww Nina, that was so lovely!
What a wonderful way to leave us for a while
They're just too cute for words :)
Though Audrey is still a complete mystery to me.

Aww that was really sweet.
Its such a good way to leave it for us.
I loved the update.

I still want to go to Paris a meet a pretty ginger.

Haha.

Unless Nat and me figure something out.

:lmfao

Amazing update as always! :arms:

Yay for Audrey admitting she was falling for him!

I love the way you don't describe things too harshly. Like, a lot is left to the imagination. You fill in the necessary bits and let the readers make up their mind.

If that makes any sense?

Amazing update, anyhow.

Sorry about the shitty feedback.

Why did the reference to Caleb's shoes make me think of Aled?

Anyhoos, let's say stuff actually related to this story :tehe:

It's kinda sweet that Audrey's scared of heights. Makes her character more human, if that makes sense? :XD

And the last sentence was amazing.

Nina, you're brilliant, ya know?

This story is so cute :D

Men are hardly ever punctual and Caleb certainly did not want to disappoint this presumption that had been created by annoyed and time keeping females.

I laughed so hard.
Wonderful update, darling. I can't get over your writing, though.
I swear, you should be a published author.

The shoes! :tehe:
I loved the update Nina. The description of it was perfect. It felt like I was there again, it was so accurate. Except I wasn't stuck there with Caleb Turman.
But honestly it was beautiful (:

I was 'awww-ing' by the end of that.
I love how you describe things, it puts a clear picture of it all in my mind.
And the slipper shoes, you just had to get them in somewhere :tehe:

I loved the update.
I like how you described Kyle's hair and the sudden need for Starbucks.
:tehe:

So now I shall leave feedback.

Your comment reminded me that this needed feedback.

:weird

I really loved this update. I'm intrigued with where this is going.

Nina the update was brilliant
I'm probably as curious as Caleb about Audrey

Beautiful as usual =]
Brilliant update

CALEB!

Yay I love stories about the ginger :D

Very excited for the rest of it :D