11:11 - Comments

" The music we made those nights contrasted starkly with the requiems of the day: gun shot percussion and heartbreak vocals formed anthems of a different world where Frank and I didn't belong. "

you're writing forever amazes me =D
this is starting off so great

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That was really adorable.
In all honestly, the "cute" Ferards always beat the "sexy" ones in my opinion.
I don't even know what to say, it was just so sweet xD
I'm really looking forward to finding out more about their situation and neighborhood.

It's so sweet I've got tooth ache!
But for some reason, it's kinda sad. Dunno why, I can't put my finger on it, but it just seems like this is going to be a very sad story... *shrugs* meh.

awh! this was adorable and sortta sad... I'm not sure why sad but it just... is O.O
Anyways, this was really good n_n Was this a one shot or is there more?

ooh update.
that's really good X^)

Aw. This sounds really sweet :tehe:
I like it :cute:
More soon!

Ah, this sounds sweet.
Frank seems like the kind of sappy hopeless romantic and Gerard's the sophisticated older protective boyfriend.
I don't know, they just seem like that to me. :cute:

But really, I'd like to point out the fact that your writing style is amazing. Even though I'm not quite entirely sure of the whole concept of this, I love it already.

So update soon, yeah?