Now I'm kinda wondering why you haven't updated on this one, because I love it! The first chapter worked as a really good description of Dakota - I particularly liked the part about the bums who wanted to get out of the mess while she was doing the opposite thing... And the second chapter made me laugh, especially the heading *lol* Pwease do continue? ^_^
The first chapter worked as a really good description of Dakota - I particularly liked the part about the bums who wanted to get out of the mess while she was doing the opposite thing... And the second chapter made me laugh, especially the heading *lol*
Pwease do continue? ^_^