I think your story is cute but I just have one problem with it..Not all of us understand French or whatever they are talking in and it makes the conversations where they use that language really really hard to understand so maybe in parentheses you can write in English what they are talking about?
that really confused me haha. first off she was fine and they just had sex, next she was in agony... arghh, confused, but i hope she's okay. update soon?
I wonder who's the one who is starting drugs again. I kind of think it's Max, but who knows maybe it's Haley? Amazing update and I can't wait for the next one.
I KNOW WHO IT ISSS!! I KNOW WHO IT ISS!!! *SPAZ* but in case someone reads this comment I. WILL. SAY. N O T H I N G. Then again, it's not like people careeee right? :) About me that is. I almost cracked up when you wrote "unknown POV" hahahahaha. :D
heyyy, just found this story and i kinda love it. :) but arghhhhhh they all need to stay off the drugs! & to me it sounds like her point of view but you said it was an unknown...arghh im confused haha. update more asap!!
B I T C H . Wait, what's Ronnie on? If you wrote it I probably skipped it. You know me. DOOD. THERE WAS SPANISH IN THIS CHAPTER AND I UNDERSTOOD ALL OF IT! I'M PROUD OF US! ...Unless you used a translator. Hahahahaha.
need more soon hun :)