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  • stopkellinme

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    This was good. I liked the way you wrote it: not like a traditional story, but in rhyming stanzas and stuff. It was a great story, and I like it. Like others said, part of it was confusing. I didn't know if they were friends at first or lovers. Anyway, good job :)
    June 30th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • lucie;

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    Awh this was sweet :)
    August 22nd, 2010 at 04:03pm
  • Beloved.

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    really cute.
    April 29th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • Sammy-Poo!

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    Wow, that was really good. Confusing at first, though, but I got it afterwards. You're very talented.
    August 31st, 2009 at 04:14am
  • ItsOkayToBeGay

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    You really kept the story cute and realistic,
    August 2nd, 2009 at 09:43pm
  • Flynn Rider

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    I'm quite confused here.. So, in the beginning - they weren't lovers? They were just friends with benefits? Maybe that's what you're pointing.. It seems like it. But confusion or not, your writing is amazing. It was like a poem, but the dialouges made it seem fit the category of a story/one-shot.

    I like all the little one-line sentences in italics you put. My favorite line has to be, Would it be okay if I took your breath away? It simple and yet fit the story all together. I like how she asked him the question 'why me?' and his reply, 'you're adorable and cute'. I squealed reading that - it's just so fluffy and cute ^~^

    I have nothing else to say about this story/one-shot.. But I do have to say that you're an amazing writer. Your writing style is different from the other authors I've read. And I read in your about that you're very keen in you writing... Relax - you're really a great author and if you do get famous one day, I'll buy all your books ^~^

    The last verse/paragraph/stance,
    When you leave, everything goes back to normal,
    you and I will just be friends,

    no one will ever know,

    You had me at hello.
    Is a lovely ending (:
    July 17th, 2009 at 04:21am
  • solovely;

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    Again it was wonderful. You are very talented.
    June 23rd, 2009 at 07:47pm
  • Whitnee

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    This was amazing. I've never read anything like it. I loved it.
    June 2nd, 2009 at 02:29am
  • BEEWILD3R.

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    You're an amazing writer.

    Really.
    ;]
    October 10th, 2008 at 04:36am
  • wakeupdreams

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    absolutely amazing! I've never read anythign like that before. loved it =]
    September 19th, 2008 at 10:37pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    Sweet, but very sad at the same time.
    September 9th, 2008 at 12:10am
  • Splendid

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    two words....LOVE IT!
    September 9th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • Audrey T

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    I really really loved this. I want more stories like this. Write one for me,please? I'd love you forever.
    September 8th, 2008 at 04:28am
  • karakartho.

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    I loved it.
    it was amazing.
    it was sad but... how to desrcibe it.
    In Love
    August 22nd, 2008 at 12:01am
  • Blame Me

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    that was sad. but it was totally awsome!!
    July 31st, 2008 at 02:56am
  • munch

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    Clap I loved it, your extreamly talanted.
    July 30th, 2008 at 08:33pm
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