Just for the Record - Comments

In my slightly sleep-drunken state, I have come to the ridiculous conclusion that my utter infatuation with every single word you have ever written can not be expressed through my own words. I can't comment about the beauty or the raw intensity. I can simply say that I love every moment of these stories you through yourself into.

just for the record, you're an awesome writer.
you write so honest and with so many emotions without getting corny or anything, it's just... pure and... new. frerard stories are getting copied and even the style is the same, but you make it all new and interesting and fresh and perfectly brilliant. i really love this.

Still on your page day 2. .hahahaha. .actually i just hangin your page last night . .Wow you just wow me. .Just for a record i love how i stumble on your page and started reading your creation. I love your writing style. .

You have a gift.

Repetition Repetition Repetition. I love Repetition.

This was so fucking descriptive my jaw dropped. I love the line(s) "Sweet, Drunk Gerard" I don't know why. To me the words Sweet and Drunk are opposites. Even though in reality they aren't. I think they are. Drunk people are usually assholes.

Anyways... my second favorite part was when Gerard was in the hospital and you compared him to Jesus Christ when he was stripped and beaten on the cross. I thought that was smart. Because before when you compared him to Jesus(heyzeus haha I know I spelled it wrong) it was the complete opposite.

I adored this. It was very refreshing.

Adorable.

There are endless ways for me to try and describe just how gorgeous your writing is. None of those ways ever really do the trick, to tell the truth.

I love this. It's raw, it's beautiful, it's tinged with both humor--sometimes bitter--and sadness. The storm of emotions you capture in every fucking line astounds me. For some reason, Frank's outburst, as Gerard was dying--that stood out to me the most. It was so completely captivating, utterly real.

You really do have talent. It's insane.

Love Love Love

WHOAAA. :cheese: Very intense. You're so descriptive with your writting. I've never read a story with so much feeling and emotion as this one. You make me want to dance! I think I'll go read more of your stories.

Awww! First of all, I love the theme of ‘just for the record’.

Second of all, I love Frank’s character. I also love Gerard’s ‘sweet, drunk’ personality and character. And I also love how the two go through so many emotions based on that.

I love your descriptions. I think I’ve said this before, but you have like... (does this make sense) the best descriptions I’ve ever read. Phrases like “thin pink rose lips” and “jagged with swirls of olive sewn in” always paint a picture in my mind.

And damn, your stories are always full of emotion. I found myself like frowning and smiling and making various faces while reading. And especially the Gerard getting into the hospital part, and how Frank wouldn’t see him. This line “ Just for the record, when I told you that you could go fucking die for all that I cared, I didn’t actually mean it.”, sounded so childish of Frank to say and Gerard to follow, but then so realistic as well.

The ending, where Gerard asks Frank to marry him (which I found absolutely adorable in the way that he does ask), just put a smile on my face with the way you wrote it. I don’t know if this line, “I wanted to believe it too.” was supposed to make Frank sound doubtful, but the ending is just so cute.

I lovelovelove your stories. I always love reading them because you are an awesome writer. :]

I got all choked up...
I love the way you write. It really shows what the characters are thinking and feeling. Your plots are always amazing too.

I really thought this was going to have a sad ending, there were so many bad omens I was almost positive of it.
It ended way better than I thought it would.

Can I ask where you got inspiration for this from?

Can I just say a - FUCKING - mazing!

I love how descriptive it is and how you repeat certain phrases; i.e. 'Just for the record, . . .' and 'sweet, drunk Gerard'.

I also love the strange juxtaposition of the love on the background of intense dislike and disgust.

Normally I'm not motivated to run right to the comment section and give people feedback, but this piece made me want to just jump up and scream. It is honestly the best thing I have read in weeks.