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  • fool's paradise

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    Ohh! I liked that.
    It had a wonderful twist at the ending.
    Great write.
    August 1st, 2008 at 03:00am
  • Keisha Necropsy.

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    OMG I cried when I heard that he died! D: Very well written, though.
    July 31st, 2008 at 01:15am
  • Keshuoo

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    Aww! Now I'm sad Cry That last bit of dialogue tore my heart to pieces. Or shattered it? And scattered it? Awww again! Great job. This was a nice little oneshot. You should be proud of it. This may not matter but the layout fit the story perfectly. I'm glad I browsed through the OneShots thread. :D Even though this was sad, it was great to read. Congrats! You did a super job.
    July 30th, 2008 at 11:47pm
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