not bad, though you made some grammar mistakes. and when another person is speaking, make a new paragraph for them. like how Angel spoke and then in the same paragraph, Janaesha replied. make a new paragraph when someone else is speaking, so there's no confusion.
Also, with the Ryan[her brother!] part. You could make it into like this, "Angel, it's for you," Ryan, her brother, handed her the phone.
and when another person is speaking, make a new paragraph for them.
like how Angel spoke and then in the same paragraph, Janaesha replied.
make a new paragraph when someone else is speaking, so there's no confusion.
Also, with the Ryan[her brother!] part. You could make it into like this,
"Angel, it's for you," Ryan, her brother, handed her the phone.
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