Genocide - The Best Kind - Comments

No, the last chapter wasn't' too descriptive. It was perfect. And you can't keep apoligizing for nothing happened. XD A story goes at its own pace. As long as something isn't pointless, it's neccisary. Even the smallest bit of information is important for the story. Keep writing! I'm reading!

Well, you're really good at describing every little detail to I don't mind reading it.
Keep up the good work.

You named two of the chapters "Chapter 5", and in the real chapter six, there are a few grammar mistakes. But that's all I have for innocent critisism. Please keep writing, I love this story. How can I say it enough?

In a strange way, it has a hint of Wanted on it. But it's still very unique. Don't take that the wrong way. I just automatically think of the girl as Foxx in "Wanted".

Mmk, Peace. (Or not. XD)

-Maggie-

Ah, that was so amazing!

I am absolutely in love with this story. I love every way it's described. The main charater almost seems like a child, and he's having a battle within himself about his maturity. Keep writing, this is amazing.

-Maggie-

My favorite line was: Only in death can these beings bring any slight elegance.

So far this one is my favorite.
:D

Everything you are writing goes on my head. I know that sounds really odd and strange, but it happens. Ahahah. I have my moments.
-applauds-
I LOVE IT!

This is the best story I've ever read on Mibba. And I usually don't read stories this...violent. But I would love if you wouldn't give up on this. I'll check all the time if you've updated. Can't wait until chapter 4! Keep writing!

-Maggie-

Chapter two has such amazing detail and I get the image in my head. Hah, totally incredible.

i definitely wouldnt call you a freak for this story i cant wait to see where it goes.
*subscribe*

This is actually an interesting story. I'd like to see where you go with it. (I subscribed *grins*) I just happened to be listening to a song that kind of had the same feel of this story, so it made reading it even more fun. Update quickly! <--- Just thought i'd let you know atleast ONE person was looking forward to it.

Hah, wow. This interests me a lot.
:D
-subscribes-