Lacin' up the Cleats - Comments

cute story, loved it!

Gah I loved it! It was different to others and thats what got me interested :D
I love the sound of Joe and Riley....
Roe...Jiley - nah that sounds too much like Hannah Montana(Jake + Miley) - and Joley sound a bit like (Angelina) Jolie.
Ok I'm gonna stop before I become too much of a dork. haha.

Loved the story. It was awesome and sweet. Gave me butterflies. hehe
<3

aw that was cute

Oh My Gosh!
What's gonna happen????
haha
Wouldn't that be cool if a guy said he'd fallen for you infront of thousands of people? At a stadium? Arrrgh that'd be so sweet and cool! :P

she has to figure it out

Hey! This story isn't bad.
It's really different the way the reader is the character, so it's been a bit weird reading it like that. But still good :)
I like the fact that Riley is into football. Sporty chick not a non-sporty person. Haha.
And that Kirsty. I would seriously not be caught alive with a friend like her. lols.
Looking forward to see where this goes :D

Wow, Kristy is crazy!

haha she is crazy

lol I cant believe she reacted like that!

please update soon. dont leave me there. I need more!

ah what happened?!
cant wait to see if she realizes "her" Joe is Joe Jonas!!

sorry i didnt comment on chpt 7. mibba was not working on my comp O.o
anyway. not much action but thats okaii.
cant wait till the concert scene ;)
amazinggg ..as usual.
does amazingness come naturally to you or do you actually have to make an effort?? cause seriously. w.e ur doing, its working.
haha sorry, that didnt make much sense, i use it on my brother alot, except hes an idtiot. so i switch it up and yeahh... xD IM ON CHRISTMAS HOLIDAYS YEAAASSS!!!
wonder what kristy(hope thats right xD) was doing O.o
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love it, so good!

great chapter, cant wait for the next!

that probably made no sense what so ever.
but w.e
still love this story
xD
pms !
..please :(...

ill admit.
im grinning like an idiot right now.
like imagine demi, full frontal smile yeah times that by like 5
thats how much i love this story :):):)
im an addict, and dont plan on going to rehab any time soon.
great chapter !
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AN UPPPDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE YESSSSSSSS!
i cant be as enthusiastic as id like, cuz something tragic happend at school today that shook me up like carazy!!
but update again sooon PLEASE :(

this is good, I like it

you should update this!!
seriously
ive been waiting so long.
*sigh*
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yay, update!
More!
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