Dancing With Ana - Comments

  • AlwaysMore

    AlwaysMore (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    This is amazing! I love it!!
    January 17th, 2011 at 02:06am
  • always infinite

    always infinite (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Norway
    This was really beautiful and moving.
    You did a very good job!
    xo.
    January 12th, 2011 at 04:05pm
  • Logan Lerman

    Logan Lerman (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I like the style in which you wrote it in! It's very good :D
    March 3rd, 2010 at 12:04pm
  • Faitily;Yours

    Faitily;Yours (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    so pretty, yet again :)
    September 25th, 2008 at 07:25am
  • Anna12345

    Anna12345 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Its like a small solo in a small long song, it doesn't seem like much; But it makes all the difference
    September 3rd, 2008 at 05:21pm
  • natwerezompirenstein

    natwerezompirenstein (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Macau
    Wow that was deep and really nicely written.
    =)
    August 15th, 2008 at 07:38pm
  • Spencer Smith

    Spencer Smith (200)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    First of all, thankyou so much for the comment on my story (:

    I really liked how you repeated "When Ana and I danced". The whole story was a very clever metaphor for dying. I really loved that. As people have said before, it's a bit like a poem, but it still works well as a story.
    Thanks again (:
    August 11th, 2008 at 02:27pm
  • Katyara

    Katyara (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    this was pretty moving. I loved it.
    August 5th, 2008 at 04:37am
  • paranoia.inflicted

    paranoia.inflicted (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    i liked it, but it was more of a poem than a story.
    August 2nd, 2008 at 06:32pm
  • sadlydive

    sadlydive (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Location:
    United States
    I liked it. It seems like a poem. The style let emotion feel very raw. I really liked it.
    August 2nd, 2008 at 03:46am
  • prescription

    prescription (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Canada
    That was really, really great. Well-written [:
    August 1st, 2008 at 10:52pm
  • Hopeless Heart

    Hopeless Heart (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    New Zealand
    Agian i'm first to comment!!

    Wow that's like a poem, it could be one too
    Again it was beautiful Cry
    August 1st, 2008 at 10:31pm