The Freedom of a Killer Is Gone - Comments

Your Hand in Mine:

If you saw me right now, I am definitely raising an eyebrow at you with concern on where you could possibly be going with this story. Especially with a new name like 'Stockholm'.

No worries, it's in a good way.

If you consider thoughts such as 'She-better-not-tear-J-and-Ebby-apart-because-of-a-silly-stockholm-
syndrome-theory-from-the-penguin' and 'J-better-actually-be-in-love-with-her-instead-of-using-her-or-my-
heart-with-collapse-into-10,000-little-pieces' good thoughts....

OK, and a guess at the age...

Somewhere between the ages of 13 and 15, am I close?

I couldnt say this any better!
Now imworried! xD
Loved the chapter though, it was amazing :]
More soon please!

If you saw me right now, I am definitely raising an eyebrow at you with concern on where you could possibly be going with this story. Especially with a new name like 'Stockholm'.

No worries, it's in a good way.

If you consider thoughts such as 'She-better-not-tear-J-and-Ebby-apart-because-of-a-silly-stockholm-
syndrome-theory-from-the-penguin' and 'J-better-actually-be-in-love-with-her-instead-of-using-her-or-my-
heart-with-collapse-into-10,000-little-pieces' good thoughts....

OK, and a guess at the age...

Somewhere between the ages of 13 and 15, am I close?

I LOVED IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!
WHOO! I NAILED PENGUIN IN THE CROTCH!!!!!!
GO ME!!!!! xD

Ah :D
I loved the chapters, Ebby is still kickass I see!
The new characters are cool, cant wait to see what they're capable of xD
More soon please :]

this story made me fall in love with the joker.
more soon.

how are you so good at updating like TWICE A DAY?! You must have the whole story planned out in your head already or something...
By the way, i liked the new characters, congrats to their creators ))

Great updates! Can't wait for the next one.

hmmm...i wonder what's gonna happen

great chapterr
:D

Mmm... I love that character of mine that you are creating to be your own. So cool. And, I love how she is the HEAD of the misfit mob. That's pretty amazing.

Keep up the amazing work, love. I am excited to see what happens.

oooooooooo
hahaha,

write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yep, that is sooooooo Jen-Jen =]]

mmmmmmm a raffle of characters? could be fun...
i'll definitely consider it, and I must say, I am thrilled by the fact that you've put up five well-written chapters already. It seems like the sequel was just created, and you're already so far along (which is annoying for me to say because it makes me feel like I'm saying your pregnant WHICH I'M NOT SAYING *smacks forehead*)
yeah ohkay!

~*I dub this page Joaquin!*~

Ah! :D
I come back to THREE updates?
Oh yes I love you! xD
The story is amazing as usual, can't wait for the next chapters to come x3
More soon please!

Ah, reading this story makes my day.

love love love this.
it's just as good as the first one.
tis amazing.

:D

Hmm... something smells fishy with that guy, you know. I don't think that J would like her meeting him... at all.

And I am definitely submitting to this raffle thing. If I can remember everthing I need to submit : )

u write awesome!!~!!!!!

more please!!!

with six stars already, i don't think you've disappointed.

and, it takes time for conflit to build, and you're doing fine.

I'll let you know if it's getttig to be too slow, don't worry : )