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that. was just too cute! <3 oh my goshie, so much love for this one shot, just so much love!!! :D it was so sad, so heartfelt and so emotional-- BRB not gonna come back because if I do, I'll wash my laptop to the sea with my tears alone

jk I'll come back and read this fic again <3

I am at an honest lossfor words here.
And, ask anyone, I'm never at a loss for for words.
This one-shot, it just....it made me feel so much, you know?
You are an amazing author.

Beautiful.
This Made Me Cry.
The Way You Write Is Like You Really Are Mikey.
The Emotions Are So Vivid.
You're Inspiring, Amazing, And Talented.
Kudos.

I stopped reading Fan-Fic, But you're better than a lot of "professional" authors. How could I resist?

Never ceases to amaze me, darling.

*Sigh* Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Heart wrenchingly sad and tragic, but beautiful all the same.
Honestly brings tears to my eyes.
You should write a book, go get it published, and then tell me so I can buy it! Seriously, you have amazing talent, go earn some money for it!

Gahhhhhh. -lets out long breath-

The way that you write your stories is like... It's so real. There is actual emotion in the words; it's so descriptive, that I could just imagine and feel the hurt in Mikey. How totally heartbroken he'd be that someone chose his brother instead of him. That made me really feel bad for him.

I'm always kind of a sucker for best-friends-not-lovers stories, there's just so many things you could do with that. I love how of course it seems like Mikey's the only one right for Frank, and that Gerard is a mean boyfriend. The way you write Mikey is now how I always picture him. Which is good because I can't picture him any other way, thanks to this and your other stories (I rarely read Frikeys, because going back to Postcards From No Man's Land, that was like... nothing could beat that. But I love this one as well and so I should get back to a better comment).

The phrase "pomegranate lips" is definitely different. I've never heard it before. And I say this like a million times but your writing always paints a picture in my head. I love how it's always never the same description, and every Frank or every Mikey or every Gerard is different in all of your stories.

And I fix you, Frank. Because some habits you just can’t change.

You always have perfect last lines that like... last. That I repeat over and over and can't believe that it's over. Do I say that a lot as well? Yeah, maybe I'm just reminding you. =P

Anyways. Reading this just cheered me up, a whole lot. It made my night. I want to say that this was amazing, magnificent, beautiful, but it doesn't seem enough in my mind, so this was like... all of those words combined and the better words that I don't have in my vocabulary. :]

That was amazing.
Possibly your best piece of writing.
If not the best Frikey one shot I have ever read.
Beautiful.
C xoxo

Another astounding one-shot.

The language you use - your descriptions - are incredibly elegant. There is never a wasted sentence, never a wasted word. The whole thing is very tight, and makes for a very enjoyable read.

I particularly love how everything you write is so easy to picture. I can feel myself right there with the characters. Your writing is kind of like an addicting elixir I can't get enough of. Both the structure and the language are very poetic and I find it a wonderful change from the average teenage piece.

Keep up the gorgeous work!

That was so beautiful, you're amazing!

Aww..it was great.
Loved it.
It was beautiful.

Beautiful.