Whoa... That was intense O.o I didn't think Frank'd kill himself in the end and that line from Gerard's tutorial was so ironic and it fit so nicely... Whoa C: I wish Frank got over his issues (him being poisonous)and lived happily with Gee, but I honestly liked it better this way C: it was more realistic, though a lot of things in this story wasn't really realistic C: but I don't doubt (I know this word isn't proper :/ ) your creation of Frank's character, it was hard to believe that someone like that can exist, but it wasn't unbelievable C: I haven't seen homophobic Mikey too (now that I think about it, maybe once) so for me it was an original idea, as well as him RUINING Gee's relationships, that was definitely a shocker O.o all in all it was pleasure to read C: in my imagination it ends with Gerard murdering Mikey and going to jail, where he is beaten to death. LOL I know I didn't have to tell you C: anyway, I love the way you give your reader chance to decide how it ends C:
March 31st, 2012 at 05:17pm
Like I said before, I wish Gerard could have gone with Frank. And killing Gerard would have made more sense as it would surely have erased the shadow that was already in Gerard... :shifty Because the shadow - aka love for Frankie - is already buried so deep within Gerard and obviously won't go away easily at all.
