This was really interesting, although I had to highlight the words to read it, because they're hard to read against the background.
It sort of reminds me of Uglies combined with Ender's Game. You should write more. It seems likr the beginning to what could possibly be a really good story.
It sort of reminds me of Uglies combined with Ender's Game. You should write more. It seems likr the beginning to what could possibly be a really good story.