Oh my god. This story is just so amazing! I can't get enough! I really hope you update. I love River, she's my favorite. She kind of reminds me of the younger sister who is really hyper and always high off sugar. But she's the leopard right? I keep getting the other two confused. Will's girl is a witch right? I love how annoying Brendon is with River too…I think it would be funny as hell if Pete ended up having feelings for her. He gave her an orgasm while drinking from her, so I think it is possible, and watching him and Brendon fight it out would be funny. I defiantly would like to see more of Patrick, and his "anal" self, as you put it. So far my favorite lines are: -There stood the cuddliest boy in glasses, ever. -You called girls?" Pete gave a bitter laugh, "This is war, not tea time." -Pete glared at her, "Like I'd let you kill me." "Wouldn't ask for permission," she sang back. -"Fuck you, let's go out." Pete smirked. "Well, aren't we being forward."
The last one is my favorite, Pete and his perverted self would be great to see again. Cant wait for the next update :)
-There stood the cuddliest boy in glasses, ever.
-You called girls?" Pete gave a bitter laugh, "This is war, not tea time."
-Pete glared at her, "Like I'd let you kill me."
"Wouldn't ask for permission," she sang back.
-"Fuck you, let's go out." Pete smirked.
"Well, aren't we being forward."
The last one is my favorite, Pete and his perverted self would be great to see again. Cant wait for the next update :)