Love it can`t wait for more
April 5th, 2010 at 05:21pm
Ha! This was awesome! I love the storyline... however! (and I'm not trying to flame you by any means) from a grammatically correct point of view then I think it scores about a 5. Not that I don't like the smiley things (0.0, ^.^, etc.), because I do, it's just that some people may be opposed to that in a story. You don't have to change that in this story - in fact it adds humor and keeps it fast-paced - but for future projects.
Great work! Keep it up! And you better do my precious Murtagh justice! (*cackles in an evil t33nie sort of way*)
