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  • daisuke andou.

    daisuke andou. (205)

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    This is really awesome, man.
    I love the story's originality. A lot of stories on here are just clones.
    But I think you've made something very unique and, well, special.
    The way you've developed the characters, especially Gerard, is great.
    I really feel for him.

    My brother's autistic and I'd like to say I'm more like Donna or Frank with him.
    But I guess I'm more like Mikey. So I can relate more with him.

    Anyway, I've subscribed.
    August 6th, 2008 at 02:33pm
  • Heartstrings.

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    Zero, I'll comment here too yeah?

    Holy cow love, this is...
    this is epic.
    It's a beautiful masterpiece with so much substance.
    Gerard, oh gosh, Gee made my heart ache so so badly.
    He made me whimper and keen and I sometimes want to throttle Frank.

    He slipped his fingers into the spaces in between mine and held on. He lifted it up, all on his own, without even asking me if it was okay.
    This part and the scene after... You have no idea what it did to me. Its beautiful and comforting yet so full of hurt.

    I love this Zero.
    In Love
    Wonderful work.
    August 6th, 2008 at 12:59pm
  • prototype.

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    Oh My God... This is totally amazing. In Love

    I only read the first two parts and it already hit me hard. The Storyline was very amazing, not to mention your awesome use of words. :file:

    You just made Gerard epical here, your character was very original and I liked the way you described him as a special child. I could imagine him as a very talented and handsome child, of course.

    Frank made me feel worried when he said that it was like Gerard controlling him. Of course, he should follow what the right thing was, and it was protecting him and making the child (:tehe:) feel human.

    God, please write more, I'm so excited of what'll happen next.

    Cheers to Zero for having such a great story. 8)

    AND I'll read the 3rd chapter as soon as I'm done with my school work, dammit. :cheese:
    August 5th, 2008 at 03:47pm
  • Teen Distortion.

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    Holy shit man. no lie.
    I am in love with this, Gerard is so helpless and needy.
    I am speachless.
    Props to you, -subcribes-
    August 5th, 2008 at 11:48am
  • ward-o

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    Autistic Gerard.
    Fucked-up Frank.

    Enjoy.
    August 4th, 2008 at 04:01pm