August 6th, 2008 at 02:33pm
Zero, I'll comment here too yeah?
Holy cow love, this is...
this is epic.
It's a beautiful masterpiece with so much substance.
Gerard, oh gosh, Gee made my heart ache so so badly.
He made me whimper and keen and I sometimes want to throttle Frank.
He slipped his fingers into the spaces in between mine and held on. He lifted it up, all on his own, without even asking me if it was okay.
This part and the scene after... You have no idea what it did to me. Its beautiful and comforting yet so full of hurt.
I love this Zero.
Wonderful work.
I love the story's originality. A lot of stories on here are just clones.
But I think you've made something very unique and, well, special.
The way you've developed the characters, especially Gerard, is great.
I really feel for him.
My brother's autistic and I'd like to say I'm more like Donna or Frank with him.
But I guess I'm more like Mikey. So I can relate more with him.
Anyway, I've subscribed.