Your Like Air To Me - Comments

This thing is so chalkful of mistakes, I just dont care enough to go back and fix all of them in all these old stories.

i liked this but the title
should actually be
you're like air to me :]

This was very well done! :)
a few grammar mistakes, but everybody makes them anyways haha
You write very well in first person, a reader could easily put themselves in the character's shoes.
woo hooooooo :D

Fantastic!!!
This reminded me of an episode of One Tree Hill I saw the other day. I loved it.

What's up? I reeading it. I just wanted to be the first to comment it. haha! :P ;)