Your Like Air To Me - Comments

Emily Alisa (100)

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This thing is so chalkful of mistakes, I just dont care enough to go back and fix all of them in all these old stories.

July 23rd, 2010 at 06:45am

au revoir. (100)

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i liked this but the title
should actually be
you're like air to me :]

July 22nd, 2010 at 06:00am

alivetonight (100)

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This was very well done! :)
a few grammar mistakes, but everybody makes them anyways haha
You write very well in first person, a reader could easily put themselves in the character's shoes.
woo hooooooo :D

August 5th, 2009 at 09:43am

NeonLover (100)

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Fantastic!!!
This reminded me of an episode of One Tree Hill I saw the other day. I loved it.

August 20th, 2008 at 11:28pm

Hold My Heart. (100)

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What's up? I reeading it. I just wanted to be the first to comment it. haha! :P ;)

August 5th, 2008 at 09:13pm