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  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    Glorious ending!
    And no way was that clichéd; it was just right.
    January 11th, 2009 at 05:29pm
  • FreshlyFoundFlowers

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    Awesome story, I finished most of the chapters in one night and couldn't think of doing anything else better than reading this story! Awesome ^^
    January 11th, 2009 at 09:27am
  • the.ugly.organ

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    you did a great job with the last chapter as well as with the story as a whole!
    and now I'm gonna go chack out your other stories....

    p.s.I think you made a good choice in not doing a sequel, because even though I was originaly rooting for one, I don't know what you could even write about.
    January 10th, 2009 at 06:18pm
  • love1d

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    I loved this story. I'm sad to see it end.
    :(
    January 9th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • Piece Of Pineapple!!

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    absolutely perfect. i will miss this soo much but it was just the best ending for the story. thank you for writing it and im glad that i found it. brilliant :D
    January 8th, 2009 at 10:37pm
  • Evra Von

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    I LOVED THE ENDING :D
    January 8th, 2009 at 12:48am
  • Living Proof

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    I love. =)
    <3
    January 7th, 2009 at 11:22pm
  • Angela Christine

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    Fare Well locker wars!
    It was amazing while it lasted :]
    Thank you for a captivating story and a magnificent ending :D
    January 7th, 2009 at 09:24pm
  • thatssanti

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    I can't believe it's over !
    This story was amazinggg, I love it and I totally love the ending.
    You're a fantastic writer :]
    January 7th, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • Supz

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    I could honestly cry right now.
    I loved this story like a little girl who gave me her lollipop.

    You gave me a lollipop.

    ;D

    But seriously, great ending.
    Cliche, ...smiche?
    ;]

    Gratz on the story, it was amazing
    x
    January 7th, 2009 at 02:39pm
  • Nialls Freckles

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    ohmygoodness
    I almost cried.
    I really did.
    I loved this story a lot.
    You're so amazing at writing, I will fer sure go read taht other story.
    [:
    January 7th, 2009 at 05:22am
  • Slow Down Sisky

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    aw.
    what a nice ending(:

    i dont get what the deal was with william and all those girls that kept walking by..

    whatever(:
    January 7th, 2009 at 02:49am
  • Just Delirious.

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    Nooo! I don't want it to be over!
    Though I must say, the ending was absolutely perfect. And I think Bill won, too. At least he sort-of admitted his feelings for Adele, where as she just denied them...
    I'm sorry I keep turning my meant-to-be positive comments into rants. At least you won't have to deal with me anymore...
    Anyway, congrats on such a wonderful story! i'm sad to see it go!
    January 7th, 2009 at 02:17am
  • be realistic.

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    AND WE ALL LOVE YOU.
    The story did turn out well.
    Wonderful, actually, for a cliche. (Ignore the cliche bit)
    January 7th, 2009 at 01:41am
  • Right 'Round

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    Is it bad that I really AM sad that this story is over?
    I feel slightly pathetic ha ha ha.
    And I will check out your new story.
    January 7th, 2009 at 01:34am
  • Mollzay.

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, William WOULD have a kissy myspace default excuse.
    Wonderful way to end it; I'm very happy.
    You're a great writer, and you deserve to be acknowledged, so don't be surprised when your other stories have a billion subscribers too. :]
    January 7th, 2009 at 01:33am
  • SixtyNine.

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    That ending was so utterly stunning that I felt compelled to comment.
    Immediatey.

    I have enjoyed this story the entire way through, but that final line surpassed everything - i also admire the decision not to sequel it.

    It's hard to let go of a story [at least for me aha], and you write so wonderfully that it's a shame not to, but I know what you mean about the whole conflict for conflict's sake.

    So kudos =P

    I'm off to read your other stuff now aha
    January 7th, 2009 at 01:29am
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    I am soooooo sorry I only found this as it was ending, but at the same time, I'm glad I managed to appreciate the whole thing in one go, if that makes any sense but... I mean... Argh... The past day or two I've spent every single spare moment reading this, worrying for Adele and then William and then...

    What I mean to say is;
    1. You're an awesome writer.
    2. I love you for introducing me to William Beckett, and in turn The Academy Is.
    3. I'm subscribing even though there's only the epilogue to go.
    January 5th, 2009 at 11:20pm
  • Living Proof

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    about time? lol
    i really enjoyed this :D
    but all good things must come to an end soon =/
    <33
    January 5th, 2009 at 08:50am
  • ryland_beckett

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    eeeeeee!
    kisses!
    william!
    adele!
    stating the obvious!
    January 5th, 2009 at 04:56am