January 11th, 2009 at 05:29pm
The Locker Wars - Comments
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Awesome story, I finished most of the chapters in one night and couldn't think of doing anything else better than reading this story! Awesome ^^January 11th, 2009 at 09:27am
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you did a great job with the last chapter as well as with the story as a whole!
and now I'm gonna go chack out your other stories....
p.s.I think you made a good choice in not doing a sequel, because even though I was originaly rooting for one, I don't know what you could even write about.January 10th, 2009 at 06:18pm -
I loved this story. I'm sad to see it end.
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absolutely perfect. i will miss this soo much but it was just the best ending for the story. thank you for writing it and im glad that i found it. brilliant :DJanuary 8th, 2009 at 10:37pm
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I LOVED THE ENDING :DJanuary 8th, 2009 at 12:48am
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I love. =)
<3January 7th, 2009 at 11:22pm -
Fare Well locker wars!
It was amazing while it lasted :]
Thank you for a captivating story and a magnificent ending :DJanuary 7th, 2009 at 09:24pm -
I can't believe it's over !
This story was amazinggg, I love it and I totally love the ending.
You're a fantastic writer :]January 7th, 2009 at 09:21pm -
I could honestly cry right now.
I loved this story like a little girl who gave me her lollipop.
You gave me a lollipop.
;D
But seriously, great ending.
Cliche, ...smiche?
;]
Gratz on the story, it was amazing
xJanuary 7th, 2009 at 02:39pm -
ohmygoodness
I almost cried.
I really did.
I loved this story a lot.
You're so amazing at writing, I will fer sure go read taht other story.
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aw.
what a nice ending(:
i dont get what the deal was with william and all those girls that kept walking by..
whatever(:January 7th, 2009 at 02:49am -
Nooo! I don't want it to be over!
Though I must say, the ending was absolutely perfect. And I think Bill won, too. At least he sort-of admitted his feelings for Adele, where as she just denied them...
I'm sorry I keep turning my meant-to-be positive comments into rants. At least you won't have to deal with me anymore...
Anyway, congrats on such a wonderful story! i'm sad to see it go!January 7th, 2009 at 02:17am -
AND WE ALL LOVE YOU.
The story did turn out well.
Wonderful, actually, for a cliche. (Ignore the cliche bit)January 7th, 2009 at 01:41am -
Is it bad that I really AM sad that this story is over?
I feel slightly pathetic ha ha ha.
And I will check out your new story.January 7th, 2009 at 01:34am -
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA, William WOULD have a kissy myspace default excuse.
Wonderful way to end it; I'm very happy.
You're a great writer, and you deserve to be acknowledged, so don't be surprised when your other stories have a billion subscribers too. :]January 7th, 2009 at 01:33am -
That ending was so utterly stunning that I felt compelled to comment.
Immediatey.
I have enjoyed this story the entire way through, but that final line surpassed everything - i also admire the decision not to sequel it.
It's hard to let go of a story [at least for me aha], and you write so wonderfully that it's a shame not to, but I know what you mean about the whole conflict for conflict's sake.
So kudos =P
I'm off to read your other stuff now ahaJanuary 7th, 2009 at 01:29am -
I am soooooo sorry I only found this as it was ending, but at the same time, I'm glad I managed to appreciate the whole thing in one go, if that makes any sense but... I mean... Argh... The past day or two I've spent every single spare moment reading this, worrying for Adele and then William and then...
What I mean to say is;
1. You're an awesome writer.
2. I love you for introducing me to William Beckett, and in turn The Academy Is.
3. I'm subscribing even though there's only the epilogue to go.January 5th, 2009 at 11:20pm -
about time? lol
i really enjoyed this :D
but all good things must come to an end soon =/
<33January 5th, 2009 at 08:50am -
eeeeeee!
kisses!
william!
adele!
stating the obvious!January 5th, 2009 at 04:56am
And no way was that clichéd; it was just right.