To see an epilogue would be great but if you don't, that's OK because it was a great ending to a great story! It was sweet and funny; the style of writing was different and took me by suprise; it reminded me of Mark Haddan's 'The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime'. It's directness, short sentences and lack of long description added to the story in it's own way and pulled you in to her mind and the world around her; you pulled that off well, because the style of writing you did can either be great or turn to shit and make it look like you can't write a story at all. Haha so good job :) Great story.
=] Thanks so much. I'm going to be starting a new story soon you might like. I'm not too sure when I'll finally get it out, but I'm busily working on both.
It was sweet and funny; the style of writing was different and took me by suprise; it reminded me of Mark Haddan's 'The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Nighttime'. It's directness, short sentences and lack of long description added to the story in it's own way and pulled you in to her mind and the world around her; you pulled that off well, because the style of writing you did can either be great or turn to shit and make it look like you can't write a story at all. Haha so good job :)
Great story.