Arranged Marriage to My Boyfriend's Twin? - Comments

  • Lady Nikki Nightmare

    Lady Nikki Nightmare (215)

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    I love this story...
    I especially love how Derek
    still cares about her even
    though she is being forced to
    marry his brother.

    and Carlton just intriges me...
    I want to know what his deal is...
    Your a great writer so keep up
    the good work... It's coming along
    beautifully
    August 10th, 2008 at 01:01am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    so he is not going to be a nice guy or maybe he will change...
    August 9th, 2008 at 06:28pm
  • Akuma.

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    Aww I love how Derek knows things about her.
    &&
    Thank you Miss. Xi.Angel </3333
    *sits at computer desk waiting for an update while drinking a sprite.*
    August 9th, 2008 at 05:19pm
  • Ninja Bread!

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    Thank youuuuuuuuu FriggenxSkittles.
    Yup I'll read your story!!!
    >.<
    And thank's everyone else to!!!
    August 9th, 2008 at 11:21am
  • Akuma.

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    Ello!
    I liked the fourth chapter to!
    My favorite part was "I had to marry my brother’s friggin girlfriend!"
    I do not know but it made me think of me user name.
    >.<
    Oh if you have time can you read my story Tainted Tears and Broken Promises.
    August 9th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • livelauhglove

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    I HEART THIS STORY. PLEASE POST AS MANY CHAPTERS AS YOU CAN, THX. A LOT! :D
    August 8th, 2008 at 01:38pm
  • Akuma.

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    I like pretty colors.
    :mrgreen:
    I didn't really get chapter two.
    sorry.
    >.<
    August 8th, 2008 at 02:13am
  • PenguinsRme

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    I really like the concept for this story
    August 7th, 2008 at 12:10pm
  • Akuma.

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    She got stood up.
    Ha Ha
    It made me laugh a bit. ; )
    August 6th, 2008 at 01:21pm