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  • liltebo

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    wow. i enjoyed this, it is different than what i've read. i've never read anything like it. Adia is a strange name but it fits her character nicely. and grayson is adorable the way he is reaching out to her. i can't wait to read more.
    please update soon. looking forward to it.
    August 8th, 2008 at 05:55pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Well, finished so far and so far I'm hooked. I like how you keep going back to "well, I'm not any woman" it's a great tag line for the story and is a running reminder that actually, even though she's not just "any woman", she's really starting to feel like a woman. Grayson is slowly giving her the confidence to break the routined silence and I love the last line to chapter 4; she's scared!

    Extremely well written.
    August 8th, 2008 at 12:50pm
  • MCRLUCY

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    Chapter 2: You really need to carry on with this story. I'm really into it and I love your style of writing.
    August 8th, 2008 at 12:32pm
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    A very well constructed and well written first chapter. Adia is very intriguing; she is very similar to me. I'm not saying I devote my life to being silent, but I do like my own company. I read in silence; I sit in coffee shops reading in silence. The only time I hate silence is if my hubby and I have had a disagreement of sorts. Sometimes silence makes me very nervous; sometimes it's just wonderful. Excellent first chapter. Keep it up.
    August 8th, 2008 at 11:27am
  • gaultface

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    inkStorm:
    awww
    it started off a little slow, but...
    I LOVE THIS!!!!!
    I think Grayson is being cute (I must be like other women then)\
    Adia is WIERD, whats up with that?
    PLEASE update soon!!!
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    i digg this a lot.
    it makes me heart feel all better.

    and i don't think adia is weird.
    August 7th, 2008 at 04:17am
  • Thiscouldbetheend

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    inkStorm:
    awww
    it started off a little slow, but...
    I LOVE THIS!!!!!
    I think Grayson is being cute (I must be like other women then)\
    Adia is WIERD, whats up with that?
    PLEASE update soon!!!
    *subscribed*
    haha yes. Adia is very weird. She's the person I wish I could be in a way. Thank you. oh, I didn't mean for it to be slow. I just started rambling. I couldn't stop typing. I will say this, I have no idea where this story is going. But I love it. So I will update very soon.
    August 7th, 2008 at 04:14am
  • inkStorm

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    awww
    it started off a little slow, but...
    I LOVE THIS!!!!!
    I think Grayson is being cute (I must be like other women then)\
    Adia is WIERD, whats up with that?
    PLEASE update soon!!!
    *subscribed*
    August 7th, 2008 at 04:03am
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