She Said, She Said - Comments

Okay, I got to chapter two and I couldn't carry on. I'm afraid its not to my taste but I could find nothing wrong with it and I'm sure you'll get plenty more people reading your divine story. Not for me but keep it up all the same.

so good
cant wait for more

I love your story. You need to keep updating. I think I'm addicted. lol

Why is Caleb always sitting in a comfy chair? Haha.

I really love this and I'm really glad I got caught up again.

Loveeeeeeee you & your writing.

woohoo i thought u would never update. lol but u did!! and i loved it it was great update again soon? please :)

i love it
amazign
cant wait for more

i just finished what you have
and im in love with this story
cant wait for more

I rolled my eyes, and went over to her messy closet. Pulling out a random purple t-shirt, I walked over to the white door. I knocked twice, and waited for her to open the door. Sylvia’s face appeared, and I handed her the shirt. Before she could close the door, I whispered, “Hurry up! And Caleb’s here.”

THis is in chapter 16 and i just wanted to let you know she cant walk to the door

i love it really
im gonna finish it some other time
cuz its super late
and i need to shower still
cant wait to see what happens next angel hahaha

hello
i just started reading
and i thought i should tell you that in chap 10
there is a mistake you say that valerie waved at her and then mr.stubbs says this is valerie, or maybe im crazy hah
im going to read more now

I really liked the emotion in this chapter. In a way, it was very respectful.
But one thing- Sylvia doesn't have footsteps.

way to leave a cliff hanger lol
i really like your writing style alot, and it made my night when i realized you updated this story, which is quickly becoming one of my favorites =]

Thanks for all the comments, guys!

Aw, it's not bad. I kind of like the bonding between Auntie and her. I mean, it shows how things are beginning to changing, including her outlook on her future.

Of course, it's reasonable he wouldn't want to tell her his reasons, but I sure wish he would just spill his metaphorical guts on the table and sort through it all. There are so many questions left unanswered.
Maybe if she would explain her story, he would open up.
(Those would be horrible nightmares.)
I really enjoy reading your story and style of writing. I love all the little details you add, like the green shirt. It makes for a great mental image that still lets you imagine and develop your own personal affects.

My prediction for the reason he doesn't leave on the weekends is that I don't think Caleb has a place to go. Maybe he parents abondoned him (or they died) and he was just trying to get by by doing crime. Maybe he'll tell her, maybe he won't. I hope he tells her. I mean, they really need to lean on eachother, helping eachother recreate their own lives.
This story sparks an unfamiliar intrest for me, which is weird, but good. I'm already excited for the next update!

adorable. <3
loveeeed it. ;D

I really like your story :D

Hey, I really enjoy this! You've got a nice mood and it's not over in thirty seconds which is good. And Sylvia has a good sense of humour! *subscribes*

this story is really good.