i didnt know u had a new one! *subscribes* woot yeah, this one's dark, but it's greattt, i like how it's almost poetic in some parts. wonderful writing <3
Crazy story . . . And I mean that in a good way. I hope the story gets a little bit brighter . . . Lol. I always hate sad endings. Keep writing, the first chapter held my attention the entire time. You're really good at description too!