On and On - Comments

please update all your other stories
i am about to cry i LOVE LOVE LOVE kayden and joe and am so said to see another story end, i am not a fan of one shots but i am going to read the one shots you post of kayden and joe, please write more stories i would love to read anything you write especially if it is like the relationship between joe and kayden, they got my hooked on all your stories

Is this story done or are you still writing for it??

I love this story

I think I'm gonna bawl. I remember coming across Fanfiction and your story had been updated that day. I read it and you were up to chapter 6. I bookmarked the page and then I remember you asked for reviews but you didn't accept anonymous reivews. I had made an account just because I wanted to tell your story was amazing.

And now the sequel has come to an end. Joe and Kayden have come a long way. I loved the story to bits. It was addicting the way you wrote. You described their relationship so perfectly and detailed; I couldn't help but beg for more.

I will most definitely read the spin off. <3

-DyingAngelx3.

WOW! the beginning was so saucy... GREAT! I can't believe this is it. I love how Joe and Kay kinda spurred this WHOLE thing... like their struggles and love kinda make it necessary for you to tell Kevo and Mack's story. I would def read. I loved it! And Kena was SO cute. She is SO much like Kayden! And milo with the gum... hahaha!

Goodness.. I'm crying now.
Haha.
It's so sad, but I loved the ending.
I'm definitely gonna read the spin off :)

this was so awesome!!!
i am so glad that you wrote this one!
especially since i've been reading since the days of the other site you posted on.
SPIN OFF! YES!

I think a spin-off sounds great! I'm not ready to let this characters go. And being Kevin and Mack's turn, sounds even more interesting.
Hope you do decide to take the time! :D

I figured, or I hoped that you would have something after this once I read the things about Kevin and Mack. It would terrible just leave it at that. But I loved the chapter! Can't wait for the spinoff.

I'm very sad about Joe/Kayden coming to a close but VERY excited to see the Mack/Kevin spin off. I will definitely check out that and read it once it's posted. Awesome job with this story and I seriously cannot wait to read more of your stuff. Awesome, awesome work!!!

Sooo amazing! Although I think I might cry as it's over!

Yes! I would so read the spin off.
Great ending!! I loved it!
xoxo

aw good ending. love it.
and i would so love to read the spin off. :)

:[ Its over.

But I would love a spin off. :D

Ahh man, its over. This sucks. I remember when I used to wait for the next update for The Good Life, and now On and On is finished on mibba! Kayden and Joe have come a long way, and I love their characters so much! They make one of the cutest couples in Jonas Fanfic history, in my opinion. I love reading The Good Life and On and On over and over again, their story never gets boring. Looking forward to the spinoff and the next Time Well Wasted. Gosh, all your stories are amazing and I can't pick one as the best because they are all so equally unique and perfect! Keep writing these wonderful stories, they rock.

WRITE MORE! I really like all of your characters, but I really want to know what happens to Joe, Kayden, and their family:) Please?

this story was amazing, I'm sad it's over!
I would definitely read the story about Kevin and Mack!

yeah i would totally read the spinnoff

aww!!! ill be so sad to see it end!
but i understand where your from!
even though it was forced, it was still adorable! <3

I can't get over how much Milo reminds me of how joe must have been as a child. I could picture him shouting "Cool!" in a silent room

I so love the tender moments of this story. like when she thanks Denise. It brought me back to that whole time after she lost her father ;(

I loved the part of this chap too, where she wakes up and nobody is in the room except Joe. That whole part where she is in pain, but doesn't want him to leave is TEXTBOOK! after delivery. brava!

And HUTCH! What can I say.. I just love his character and am glad you decided to bring him back for this. And KEvo as a dad.. swoon! also Joe with Kenna.. classic dad's best girl ;)
loved it!

OMG i wish you could continue on with this story or at least do another sequel its one of those
don't finish this story ever stories
KEEP WRITING I BEG YOU