The park - Comments

“Ok lets go eat before Mikey eats all the food in the house.” He laughed and nodded. “No for real one time I woke up at like 2 and everything was gone.”
hehe. and i just realized, yea, gerard gets beaten almost every chapter! hehe.
i was covered in flour while i read this XD
i think it should be frankies pov =]
more soon?

ah those assholes!!
why cant frankie and g just be happy without all the hate! ah those fuckers.
i love how gerard cares so much for frankie to not let him get hurt.
you better update soon!

*subscribes*
i love this story
i think it should be frankie's pov
update soon?
=D

aw that's too cute!
i always enjoy readin your story it just gets me so happy to read about other peopls being happy :) i love how gerard's always there for frankie. it warms my heart, just like when i see mikey smile it's too cute.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww Frankie is sooooo cute in this!!! His mum's boyfriend is an arsehole though! I love it... X...

as you may already know, i love this story
and these are some of my favorite things from this chapter =]

“MOMMY be nice to me I need food or I‘ll die!”
mikey.... *sigh*

He was making weird noises and kissing the waffles, it was disturbing.
i can see mikey doing that =]

Does he want me to get hard?
why yes gerard, thats the point XD

hehe. anyway, this story is amazing =]
more soon?

Dude i totaly wanna marry this story and make awsome little sprogs with it!!!!

THIS STORY IS THE SHIZZLE !!!!!
and dont you all forget it ;)

hey good story u got going cant wait to read the next chapter lol good stuff

oh no what happened!!!
i hope frankies okay!!!
more soon?

what's going on with frankie!!
mmm...this looks like a job for super g! *gerard flies in with a cape*
i need to know more, update or face the rath of mikey's toaster of doom!

i want a zombie frankie!
that would be the coolest thing eveeer!
no matter what happens, g and frankie will be together forever. now i have grease songs stuck in my head, we will alawaaays be togeeether!

*GASPPPPPPP* Gee got beated!!!!!!!!

I swear some-one needs to pop a cap in his step-dads arse!!!!

UPDATEE please!!!!!!!!!!!!

:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Aww whats gonna happen to Gee?
Update soon

aw that bitch!
you can't just go around hurting my gerard!!
unless you wanna deal with me and frankie!! and of course mikey's toaster of doom!
pleeeease update!!

mikey needs to chillax.
i wouldn't have a problem with frankie dry humping me. it's alll good.
i loved the update!! mooore soon!

OMG i love it!!!
im soo sorry i wasnt able to read it earler *kicks laptop*
this shit is too cute i cant wait to read more if i ever get back on

:lmfao

im a retard at times :)

please please please PLEASE update, like, NOW!

i swear to bob if you do it now i will do a little dance and maybe even pee myself with excitement, just a little though.

and the fact that my mum said i have to tidy up when ive finished reading makes the update evem more important!

thankyou and goodnight :D

x x x

awww thats soo cute ...frank wrote gerard on his books with hearts .... lol ....... its really cute ..... xxx

AWW YESSS!
frankie can now go to gee's school!
that's so cute he write gerard all over his notebook with hearts!
pleeease update soon!