Hollywood Hills and Suburban Thrills - Comments

  • SparkOfImagination

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    Yay!! Yayyyy!!!! This last chapter just made me SOOOO happy!! ^_^
    Haha, and now sadly back to the suckiness that is college work... >.<
    Can't wait for your next update!!
    November 12th, 2008 at 04:57am
  • cameoskies

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    one word: cute.

    ok scratch that.
    two words: amazingly cute.
    November 12th, 2008 at 03:21am
  • wakeupdreams

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    omg i loved that chapter! it was written so well! it actually brought back memories *sighs in content* I love this story sooo much! I can't wait for your next chapter!!!
    November 12th, 2008 at 03:20am
  • Ourl0veistrU

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    okay i LOVE this chapter, now im predictinggg............they go to like either the tour bus or to a random spot on the grass and stargaze...........or go to a diner and eatttt and just........talk or somethin lol
    November 12th, 2008 at 02:27am
  • Cassie Ainsworth.

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    Aw! Yay! Together and happy! "] Woo!

    What does he want?

    I'll admit, I was a bit confused in that middle part. I felt like Jack. XD

    Update again soon! I want to know what he's going to show/tell her! <3
    November 12th, 2008 at 01:56am
  • Just Delirious.

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    Finally!
    I've only been waiting for that since chapter one.
    Ah, a silent reader comes out of the dark.
    Sorry it took so long for me to comment.
    November 12th, 2008 at 01:51am
  • Cassie Ainsworth.

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    This story is crazy. I love it, you and everything else. (that has to deal with you, or this story, of course XD) But seriously! How could she just not say anything? WTF? How impossibly stupid can you be?! Ha ha ha. Totally joking. But the next chapter... <3 Better have some serious lovin' in it. Ha ha ha. I'm so totally lame. <3
    November 10th, 2008 at 02:31pm
  • Erased

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    Dani's stupid...

    If I was her, I'd probably grab him...

    She better do something right this time.
    I so love this story. And the banner.... *squeals*
    November 10th, 2008 at 10:06am
  • lustbloodbeauty

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    i cant wait for the next one *squeeks* i love this story its gook keep the updates coming! :D
    November 10th, 2008 at 05:31am
  • Love.Anna.

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    Well, I'm not guessing what's gonna happen next, so you won't love me as much, but I am going to say that I really love this story and I'm waiting (not so) patiently for the next chapter!!! :) Love it! Great job!!!!!!!
    November 10th, 2008 at 05:28am
  • Ourl0veistrU

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    YAYYYY lol when i saw my name im like wtf is that MY name?>??? lol im sooo excited to read the next chapter im liek HOOKED
    November 10th, 2008 at 04:00am
  • Tasssshhh

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    OH!
    i did not see that coming. Dani's mum is a bitch! Understatement of the Century

    and yay!
    he finally kissed her =] i grinned.
    i love this story muchly.
    more please?
    xxx
    November 10th, 2008 at 12:37am
  • Cassie Ainsworth.

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    Finally Finally Finally Finally Finally!

    Yay yay yay yay! That makes me so happy! Woo! And seriously, Dani better kiss back and confess the love that they long for each other! AH! Yay. "]
    November 9th, 2008 at 11:34pm
  • huh?

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    Awww I just read the last few chapters of this and it's so cute!
    Poor Dani.
    Her mum is silly anyways:)
    Update soon?

    =]
    November 9th, 2008 at 09:17am
  • wakeupdreams

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    oh my god! i am so in love with this story! i jsut finished reading all the chapters and vegas skies by the cab was playing just as i finished! it fits so well with the scene *Sigh* such a movie moment for the best TAI story i've read <33
    November 8th, 2008 at 08:11pm
  • Ourl0veistrU

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    ohmigosh i LOVE THIS! LOL yeah so i think dani should stay for a little while with will, or either that or she runs away to new york and stays wither her dad, and THEN either
    - william calls, texts, emails whatever and tries to get into contact with dani, and then he goes to new york and finds her and she falls in love with him ORRRR
    -she stays in new york for a while to figure things out with while williams like obsessed with trying to contact her, and she realizes shes in love with him and suprises william in chicago but finds hes not there DUHDUHDUHHHH OR
    - she goes to new york then to college, where william enrolls and disguises him self and does whatever he can to hang out with dani, but dani gets all mad that william would be someone hes not and she realizes he did it cause he loves her and falls in love with him...........

    IM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    November 8th, 2008 at 07:24pm
  • goodnight-socialite

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    YAY!!!

    he kissed her!!!!

    omigod, cute (but sad) chapter.

    i felt so sorry for her!! but bilvy loves her, so all is ok with the world!!!

    update soon?
    November 8th, 2008 at 01:45pm
  • the.ugly.organ

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    so sweet.
    I really loved this.
    please update?
    November 8th, 2008 at 04:38am
  • goodnight-socialite

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    aww, that update was adorable!!

    best surprise ever!!!!

    bilvy's not sad anymore!!!
    November 7th, 2008 at 01:01pm
  • Love.Anna.

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    Loved it!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!! :D
    November 7th, 2008 at 03:43am