I love the new chapter but its cliff hangerish which insent noce i hope you pdate asap though and i cant wait !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
This story really seems interesting. ...not likely that it would ever happen though... BUT WHO CARES IF IT'S SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like it and I'm eager to read more about it. :)
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To me it seems unrealistic. Im not trying to be rude or anything, because I really do like it. Subscribed and everything but, she is a 'sex slave' and she has really nice living conditions. To me the story would have a better plot if she was treated badly or unfair. Just a suggestion, because I like what you've already done to it. Anyways keep up the good work and update.