Take Your Last Breath in Tonight - Comments

I thought that was very sweet. It was very short but the emphasis and feeling emmitted was fantastic

Ooh the end almost made me cry =] that was very sweet. That was so well written, especially for something as short as that was =] The imagery your words put forth was amazing, I could picture everything you wrote.

Thanks for submitting this, I really liked it.

This was amazing. Very sad.
A tear-jerker for sure.

This was amazingly written.
You made me cry :]]

Great job love.

Awh this story was soo cute but soo sad!
You did a wonderful job writing it! :D