May 21st, 2009 at 07:22am
Oh, darling. I love this story! The only thing wrong I can see with it is like, small grammatical errors, but here's the thing. There's great stories, all around. There's great stories that are ruined by grammatical errors, and then there are great stories that are so damn great, the grammer errors go flying out the window as if they didn't exist.
This story definitely falls into the last category. <333
Everything is so charming!
Frank, is simply adorable. I love him, but I think I love Gerard more?
I can't be sure, it's too soon. I need more of Gerard before I make that decision.
I missed so much and it's hard to go over key points. :(
I fail, but you most certainly win big big with this story.
It is a fucking shame it doesn't have more comments, because it is very very very deserving!
Whatever you do, update this soon.
Don't ever give up on it, because I am SO excited to see who makes the first move, how he does it and when where why he does it! AHHH <333
I am in love and need more!!
But whenever you get a chance, no rush of course.
If you're stuck I can help, if you need encouragement I can give it.
BUT OMG YAY FOR THIS AMAZINGLY ADORABLE AND VERY CHARMING STORY! I am completely entranced by this, and am eagerly awaiting what you have next in store for our boys. :arms:
I am so excited for more!!
<333