And Then We Will Destroy Our Bodies - Comments

  • lizzicleromance

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    Update soon, my dear.
    I am so excited for more!!

    <333
    May 21st, 2009 at 07:22am
  • lizzicleromance

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    Oh, darling. I love this story! The only thing wrong I can see with it is like, small grammatical errors, but here's the thing. There's great stories, all around. There's great stories that are ruined by grammatical errors, and then there are great stories that are so damn great, the grammer errors go flying out the window as if they didn't exist.

    This story definitely falls into the last category. <333

    Everything is so charming!
    Frank, is simply adorable. I love him, but I think I love Gerard more?
    I can't be sure, it's too soon. I need more of Gerard before I make that decision.

    I missed so much and it's hard to go over key points. :(
    I fail, but you most certainly win big big with this story.
    It is a fucking shame it doesn't have more comments, because it is very very very deserving!

    Whatever you do, update this soon.
    Don't ever give up on it, because I am SO excited to see who makes the first move, how he does it and when where why he does it! AHHH <333

    I am in love and need more!!
    But whenever you get a chance, no rush of course.
    If you're stuck I can help, if you need encouragement I can give it.

    BUT OMG YAY FOR THIS AMAZINGLY ADORABLE AND VERY CHARMING STORY! I am completely entranced by this, and am eagerly awaiting what you have next in store for our boys. :arms:
    May 9th, 2009 at 09:32am
  • black_like_my_coffee

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    uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupdate!!!!
    i'll give you TEN internet cookies!!!!!!!
    April 8th, 2009 at 05:55am
  • phoenix21

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    i like this. ur a good writer. and u picked the perfect people to right about. XD
    March 2nd, 2009 at 09:59am
  • jess18

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    no. that is a shit place to end a chapter

    no. please update

    i wanna know what happens at the PARTYYY!!!!!!

    awesome chapter
    January 18th, 2009 at 04:59am
  • DeadEnd

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    Awe, I think Jimmy and Frank would have been cute together... That's just my opinion. xDDD
    January 18th, 2009 at 04:36am
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    Aw. I totally feel bad for Frank. I'm really intrigued to know more about his past and whatnot.
    January 18th, 2009 at 02:29am
  • jess18

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    i like went to click on ch'15' and it took me back to ch 13.

    I was like... WTF. did she post twice? and i went in a circle for about 2 minutes of clicking, ch14, ch'15', ch 14, ch'15' when i finally realised ch'15' was not ch '15' but ch13. hahaha. dick head.

    so. what i'm basically saying is i want a damn update :)

    I just read all of this in one go and it KICKS arse

    :D
    January 17th, 2009 at 09:15am
  • Eugene.

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    I'm in love with this story! It's not too fast, and it's not un-realistic, and it's just perfect! Write more?! i subscribed...
    January 17th, 2009 at 06:04am
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    i love it i'm sorry i haven't commented yet :( forgive me?

    i'm really interested in this story :D update soon
    January 16th, 2009 at 01:06pm
  • DeadEnd

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    Awe, I like the updates, and I like Alex. He made me giggle. Lol. :)
    January 16th, 2009 at 05:39am
  • DeadEnd

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    Did your cat really eat your sisters bird? Wow, that has nothing to do with the story. Anyway, I really liked it. It isn't all cliché n that type of stuff. :)
    January 15th, 2009 at 10:43am
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    Now I'm mad. I just typed up a really long comment and Mibba fucked up and it didn't post. But anyway, I basically said that I'm madly in love with this story.

    Frank should really appreciate his mother a little more. Everything she said makes complete and total sense, no matter how degrading it sounds. Although we, the readers, understand that Gerard means no harm, his mother doesn't see that and I can understand what she's saying. I like Frank's mom a lot, really. She's probably my favorite character, honestly.

    Gerard sounds like the kind of person I'll be when I'm older.

    Well, anyway, I hope to see more soon. If this comment doesn't post I'll be sad.
    January 14th, 2009 at 09:41pm
  • Saint Gut-Free

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    You're amazingggggggggggggggggggg.
    For serious. We should marry, and you should write me fanfiction all day. :XD
    October 29th, 2008 at 12:13pm
  • CharredRemains

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    Awesome!!!
    October 26th, 2008 at 04:44am
  • Saint Gut-Free

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    Oh, Emery.
    You DO have mad skills with shopping carts. You just haven't found them yet.

    Fantastic chapter, by the way. :XD
    October 22nd, 2008 at 12:23pm
  • Allison Hargreeves

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    Really awesome story, poor Frank. What a cliffhanger, you can't leave it there! I wanna know how the date goes, D:.

    Update soon, ;D.

    xoxo P
    October 21st, 2008 at 11:23pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    OH geez. Poor Frank! I feel so damn bad for him...fucking principals and teachers and asshole students. I really hope someone helps him.

    But I am glad his mother's nice. You read way too many stories where Frank's mom is a bitch.

    Awesome story, really. I love it. :arms:
    August 20th, 2008 at 05:29pm
  • I C G P

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    Awh, don't worry about your kitty. Silly kitty. I had a hamster that died like four times over, then decided it wanted to die on Christmas Day. I was like: yeah, way to kill an atmosphere. ¬___¬

    Anyway, awesome update. Gerard's poem was a bit uhh, weird. Is he trying to hint at us that he was secretly abused at the 'tender age of nine'? Or maybe he imagines people molestering kids at the tender age of nine. Wow, he seriously needs his head checking...

    More when you can, though I still think Frank's poem is better than Gerard's. They should both do poems and compare their notes. That'd be funny.
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    xoxo
    August 12th, 2008 at 11:17pm
  • Metamorphosis

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    I love this story. Franks poem made me crack up! I feel bad for Frank tho, his dads an ass. update soon!
    August 12th, 2008 at 08:15pm