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  • burning.

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    I hope to God that you decide 2 update this!!!!!!!
    <3
    this is amazing! (:
    October 16th, 2010 at 05:01pm
  • EmilieAliciaTrictis

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    after reading this, i need a cold cold shower.
    i love it. its so raunchy, so naughty! simply amazing!
    September 19th, 2009 at 06:51am
  • anytime you want

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    WHY DID I FIND THIS ONLY JUST NOW?!?!?!
    Oh my god.
    You really need to update.
    Or write another Ger-Z like this.
    OR BOTH.

    I mean, wow.....
    June 5th, 2009 at 12:18am
  • Freaka.

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    Goddamit that was hot.
    Very well written, and that goes for both of you. :)
    Bravisimo.
    xoxo
    March 8th, 2009 at 11:58pm
  • chrissie.

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    Hey, I really love this so far :XD
    I think it's great, what's up.
    I just have one criticism, and I swear it's not that bad! :XD
    But try to avoid using words like 'area'.
    Those kinda words seem almost...immature,
    Considering this is smut.
    :cute: that's all, and otherwise it was brilliant.
    September 2nd, 2008 at 11:51am
  • Miss_Tallulah

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    i need a cold shower.

    xoxo
    August 13th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • I C G P

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    Gosh, I feel like such a pervert.
    :D
    xo
    August 13th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    We've decided to do this in four parts instead :D
    August 13th, 2008 at 11:28pm
  • popcandy777

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    ha i loved it
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:25am
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    I love you too =DD
    You love it really.
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:17am
  • Miss_Tallulah

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    You are a dirty bitch but I love you.

    Keep going, cracking start

    XD
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:13am
  • I C G P

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    Yeah! We finally did. Wow, we so rule. I can't believe you completed this so quick.
    : D
    xoxo
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:04am
  • Hundefot.

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    Oh geez.
    Update =Ø
    ^^
    August 13th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • Vanya Hargreeves.

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    Okay, so we finally got it up! Dance
    August 12th, 2008 at 11:54pm
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