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  • Be My Escape

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    Ha, you did end it at a perfect spot for a sequel. WINK WINK! I think you should make a sequel. Great ending chapter. Aw, I'm so glad they got together. Hey, could you leave me a message when you update a new story? I would love to read it! =]. Best wishes!
    August 21st, 2008 at 11:32pm
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    omgg thats sooo adoreable!!! =] and please dont end it=[ lol
    August 21st, 2008 at 05:30am
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    Chapter 15-- Aw, that was such a cute chapter. I'm glad they're like bonded... Ha, and don't be embarrassed. I've based so many things off of real life people, it's insane. Haha. =]. Great chapter. I'm glad both are a-ok. =].
    August 21st, 2008 at 03:23am
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    Chapter 14-- Holy cow! That was an intense chapter. I totally didn't see that coming by the way either. I never thought it would be Cacie, even though I should have none it was her all a long. Ha, my brain is going so much quicker than my fingers can type. I can't believe there are only two more chapters left, that makes me sad. And Alex DON'T YOU KILL SYDNEY! Oh God, I hope everything will be ok!
    August 20th, 2008 at 11:12pm
  • smileyface93

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    omggg i so hate u!! jk lol i wanna kno what happens i bet its cacie haha i think.. update more soon =]
    August 20th, 2008 at 04:20am
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    Chapter 13-- Are you kidding me?! Argh, you leave us with that cliffhanger and you can't update until tomorrow afternoon?! Argh. Haha. GREAT chapter. Loved it. And woah baby! I can't wait to see what happens next now! =]. Eek!
    August 19th, 2008 at 10:49pm
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    great chapter! he should break up withcacie lol! i wish hehe
    August 19th, 2008 at 05:26pm
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    Chapter 12-- Ha, I order you to stop saying that your story is not exciting. It is far from that, silly lady. haha. =]. I loved this chapter. I'm glad you showed more into the whole Alex/Sydney relationship, or what ever you call it. =]. Can't wait for more!
    August 19th, 2008 at 02:19pm
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    omgg sorry i didnt comment i was super busy and today i was at six flagsby the way iw ant u and alex to be a couple haha can; wait for more. =]
    August 18th, 2008 at 06:18am
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    Chapter 11-- I think Cacie isn't human either. Haha. There has to be some explanation for her acting so... blank-ish. Ha, that's the only word I could think of. More chapters soon please! I love this story. And It's written so greatly! =].
    August 18th, 2008 at 04:26am
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    Chapter 10-- Ha, I really want to know what happens with Cacie so badly!
    August 18th, 2008 at 12:09am
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    Chapter 9-- Wow, I feel bad for Sydney. Ha, she can't go anywhere without Alex being inside her head.
    August 18th, 2008 at 12:07am
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    Chapter 8-- What do you mean this isn't exciting? I loved it. A lot, too, I might add. =]. This story is great. You seriously have no idea how glad I am that I clicked on this story. =].
    August 18th, 2008 at 12:05am
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    Chapter 7-- Aw, Alex seems like such a sweet guy, but I'm getting the vibe that he's hiding something major.
    August 18th, 2008 at 12:02am
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    Chapter 6-- Haha. Who cares if it is a dumb reason? I certainly don't. Aw, I feel so bad for her. Hm... I really REALLY want to know where you take this story!
    August 18th, 2008 at 12:00am
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    no ur story is getting great! lol poop nuggets thats funny haha
    August 16th, 2008 at 07:12pm
  • summer girl.

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    I love your story :]]

    Update soon pretty please?
    August 16th, 2008 at 06:21pm
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    lol i love the chap!!!! =] i love storiesthat are similar from edward and bella by the way the best book series i have ever read haha. hope u post more soon =]
    August 16th, 2008 at 05:59am
  • Goodnite-and-Goodbye

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    Talk about no privacy always knowing what you're thinking.
    Whoo that would annoy me so much!
    Anyways chapter 3 was great.
    August 16th, 2008 at 01:59am
  • Goodnite-and-Goodbye

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    I read the first two chapters and I plan on reading more, it's really good.
    And simple to read. Excellent job.
    I'll continue on with it soon!!!
    August 16th, 2008 at 01:10am