"It was like real life was a black and white movie on a home TV in the background and the memory was a full color IMAX film." let's just start with that: fucking amazing. right at the beginning, and a sentence already catches my attention. this usually only happens maybe once, or at the most twice in a chapter, and it's usually not til the middle. you always seem to suprise me.
"Her mouth twisted into an almost frown, but then she took a seat across from me. I don't think she knows where to start. What would Brendon do?" i don't know what to think of that, but it definitely interested me... obviously there is a bond between these two enough to where parker would think about how he would react to the situation. interesting...
and god, don't make me rant about the " I'm not slowly losing my other half." because you are well aware of how much i already fucking love it. there's nothing better than irony.
"There were already too many things I couldn't forgive myself for." "How many ordinary people are heroes?"
the irony and foreshadowing is so plentiful that i find myself wanting to quote the whole damn thing. you're such a great writer, i really don't give you enough credit. you always keep me craving more. great job skye<3
Ah, do I detect a bit of foreshadowing? I must admit, I teared up a bit when Hailey (it is Hailey, isn't it?) was talking about Ryan. I just kept thinking about the last story. Hey, I gotta long weekend coming up -- maybe I'll go reread it! And kudos on your quick update! I wish I were as amazing as you. :D
and awe of course Spence is having a hard time... i mean look at Bren n you just know that Spence has GOT to be soo much worse off!! i just want to hug them all like this :arms: and not let go
Oh my god, no offence, but FINALLY! I've been dying for a chapter for forever! And this one was semi-sad, what with Brendon being forced to remember Ryan and everything... And yes, you SHOULD update again soon!
Holy hell she updated! fuck yeah! i've been one of many stalkers (cuz i forgot if i subscribed or not) and my stalking paid off on here and quizilla (NOxCOMMONxSENSEx ring any bells?) Lovely update cant wait for more,
Holy Fricken A you updated!!! I'm pretty dead now, so no inspiring comment from me, but it was amazing (as usual). I'm so happy you're back and thanks for letting me know about the update. It's better then I remember!
You're back! Oh my god, you have no idea how excited I was when I saw this in my inbox! And the chapter was so sweet, it was the perfect chapter to return on. Once again, I'm glad you're back.