August 14th, 2008 at 10:44pm
:omfg:
Wow... wow.
That was full of emotion, and it was so touching.
"Empty and I can hear the silence pressing against my eardrums"
I loved the description in this line. You can actually feel it.
"And we think we mean all the meaningless word-patterns we create and share and toss around."
This line really stood out to me. It's true, and you put it so beautifully.
"In the end words are all lies, all lies. But aren’t smiles just as much of a lie? Aren’t smiles empty just like words?"
This really made me think. I can feel the emotion in it.
I really loved it. It was beautiful.
It was so emotional and you brought meaning to every sentence.
It was great.