29 Saturday Road. - Comments

This was amazing. I wish you had continued it.

I'm a new reader; obv. :tehe:

I'm liking the imagery of this. It's v. v. v. good. :yah :lmfao

Sean seeing Ian stark naked - classic. And the fact that he hid his eyes just makes it all the more cheeky.

Sean's character is ever-so-slightly innocent, which makes a change to how he is normally portraid on stories. :tehe: But then again, everyone loves a little bit of Sean; innocent or not.

I'm actually listening to TBO at this particural moment in time. :tehe: How cool am I.

I really, really like this story. So I shall subscribe, and I hope you do update soon; if you can.

Much lovee. <3

haha so good :)

"go sean you have one too" HAHAAAA,

ROFL ROFL,

its been SO long, meh, it was worth it, *Imagians Ian naked* ....... *drooooolls*

xx

I really like this story, it sounds intriguing.

And heh, in the first chapter "Ian, half naked as ever."

The way you've described the relationship between Bert and Gerard is really good. You can see that they go well together and they really match each other.

And oh? Oh oh? the last part of chapter two!

"A young man was tied, stark naked, to Ian's bedpost. A piece of cloth cut into his mouth, stopping him from speaking, and there were several scratches over his chest, spelling out the word "WHORE."

"Matt Davies," she sighed. "Not again.""



I think Ian's job suits him well. I can imagine him "cutting posh bitches hair" :tehe:

The last part of the third chapter was rather good :tehe: How Ian's all calm and cool, and isn't really too bothered with Sean walking in on him naked. And how Sean needs a "cold shower".

This story is awesome. And the next feedback I leave will be better. Cause this was a sort of feedback for all three parts so far.

...But I don't want Hayley to be all on her ownsome!
You write her way too sweet for that :XD

...Snackfood...

Definately an extrovert.

Half suprised that Sean is straight in this haha.
I like the characters in it... and poor little Matt,
again suprises me that its not Sean in this position haha.
But him and Hayley seem cute, they would be a cute couple :)
Love it
<3

Holy fuck.

I missed your sexy, sexy writing.

I adore Ian's character.
Especially they way he described his work, making it sound magnificent, then just sort of casually blowing it off lol with "thats what he told the posh bitches anyway". Or something :XD

:lmfao His snack eh?
:tehe:
I could do with one of those :XD

I'm surprised Hayley still has hair, i mean, come on. One, don't piss off Ian. Two, don't piss off a hairdresser. Three, for fucks sake don't piss off a hairdressing Ian that wants to fuck some tasty hottie though the matress.

Sean seeing his arse was just...delicious :tehe:
Very. Nice. Imagry :tehe:
Then he saw his penis :lmfao
That's just classic. And amazing.

The smirk could practically be heard in his tone, as he turned back to the bathroom and sauntered in for a hot shower. Sean, meanwhile, wandered to he and his girlfriend's bedroom in a slight daze, wondering if he should follow up Ian's steaming hot shower with a cold one of his own...

Long quote i know...but...:yeah

Overall, very well written. It flows a lot, which i like.
And obviously, amazingly hot in a teasing sort of way :yah

Brian just grumbled in response. He wore only a kimono and three coats of eye make up. A cigarette hung from his mouth. He yanked the cupboard open and pulled a bottle of absinthe from the top shelf.

that's the single best description of brian molko ever. fo shizzle. xD

i love this, it makes me laugh hysterically x]
so...*subscribes*

susie x

ohmygod!
YES!
gotta love brian molko ;)
xx

now this seems like a immence story, i loved the fact that Hayley is the only girl in a all but gay house :P

fun fun fun

lol at the socks comment :P

*Laughs hysterically*
Oh Matthew, what ARE you like?!
I loved that, immensly!

Ian, half naked as ever - :P Blatez.

This story is amazing, you know i'm loving it already.
Still not sure about Sean being straight, i know he'll cum round though :P

:yah so many hot couples!

S'got amazing potential and i know its gonna be epic in all forms of epicness.
The rest better be as good as the start, i know it will though.

More when you can.

xxxx