The Wind Apprentice - Comments

Argh, no fair. I want to know what he read. You're very good at putting suspense at the end of chapters.
I have the internet in my flat now so I'm catching up on all my story updates (:

I like the description of the city. it reminds me of Dsicworld which I love!! I'm curious to know about the bald eagle thingy. (I hate spiders too, though just certain types, namely harvestmen with their tiny bodys and long thin legs...urgh!)

Awww I love Ray...he soounds so sweet. I always wanted a familiar every since reading northern lights (or golden compass...depends where you live I think)

It's ok about the cookie, the confetti was good enough :)

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Interesting story so far, I like it (: It's a shame storys of these genres don't have much popularity on here because I prefer them to fanfic stuff. Keep writing

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