Brian Haner Jr - Comments

beautiful story

this is an AMAZING story. You are a great writer. Keep it up

I love this fan fic it def. made my top 5. i love it and as a writer u rock

How are there only 11 comments for this story? This is like, the most adorable story EVER. Not only is there romance, and amazing sexytime, but Brian is so funny in this. I was texting my friend all the hilarious things he was saying. I kind of wish you'd included a little more about Sky, since I kind of wanted some more bonding to happen. Your description of the way Brian felt when he was holding her for the first time was phenomenal, and it would have been nice to have more moments like that. Although I do understand it was more of a romance than that kind of story, and that was just incredible. It was nice and slow, and you didn't try to rush the plot or characters at all. This story is fantastic!

Aww. Damnn, you're an amazing writer! I read your Zack Baker story, too (I used to be MelodicMisery ^_^) and you're really good! I could totally see your stories coming out as romance books... :] I loved this story! Great job!

I loved this story. Very touching and so much of it I related to. Nicely done. *claps*

I LOVED this story, it was so cute and happy! :]

Love The Story!!!! I stayed up to about 5:30 in the morning to just to finish reading it!!!!
Was that the ending of it or is it stil in progress

When I first started reading your storys I almost clicked the big red X on the top corner of the page, but then as it got deeper and deeper I coulden't move from the computer. Everyone that wanted to use it was pissed at me, but I didn't care because your story is the best one I've read in a longgggggggg time. Please don't tell me that was the end because I fucking love it. And if it is then PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequal!

Im deffinitly going to tell all my friends about this story since it is fucking amazing.

Please give us more soon!

Good job hun =].

omg i love all 30 updates they wer amazing =]
its that the end cus i need more =/

Honestly, I think this is the first.. really good love story I've ever read. I mean, in other stories, people just fall in love, you know? By the first chapter, they're already telling each other they love each other.. this was a really good story because their love for one another grew over time.. I loved this story, it was really good! I loved it. :]

This is such a sweet story. (:
I love it, I don't understand why you don't have 10 stars, this is way better than most 10 star stories I've read.
Update again soon!
*subscribes*

this is sooo sweet!! i love it!
update soon please!

I love it! Please Continue!

Love it.
cept for chapter 9.
confusing...cuz there's no quotation marrks in teh dialog.....
but besides that
woot!