The Pretender - Comments

Well.
That was pretty amazing.

This story is really amazing.

I really loved this!!

i felt a little sorry for him but it was clever what she done!
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amazing.
loved it.
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Wow I really liked this I love your writting style by far the best I've seen in a while :)

The first full paragraph completely summarised what I think of BMTH :tehe:

I'm gonna read the rest of it now. :XD

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I absolutely love the character of Pippa, even though she's a bit of a bitch. :XD

This line is cracking: In one hand was her vintage clutch, in the other a can of Carlsberg, which she carried with such attitude that it could have been a martini.

I really love how you evolved the two characters over the course of the oneshot and the descriptions are spot on.

Loved it, loved it a lot.

i really liked it
unique writing style

I loved it! : D

Oh my goodness that was amazing
Oh, bloody, wow.
I can't do it justice to be honest, it was just so good!
Loved it.

Gahahaha I loooved it.
Sheesh, I have no idea how many times i've told you that I love your style of writing.

But, I'll say it again.

Nina, I love your style of writing

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