In The Autumn. - Comments

An absolutely gorgeous story.

This is absoutly beautiful Amber, truely it is and the story has truth behind it. Sometimes after a death it seems hard to move on and see beauty in the world but when you finally take a step back and look at things: the green in the trees, the innocence in a childs eyes or the tranquity of birds singing in summer you realize that things aren't as dark as you made them out to be, and then you realize that the people your mourning wouldn't want you to be sad forever, they'd want to hear your laughter and see your smiles from the other side.

The ending was espically nice, but I do have some questions about the ending, why repeat the same thing 3 times? I think that even if you had only said it 1 that it still would have had the same effect as if you did it three. Also, was that young man possibly a Brown?

Oh wow. :] This was amazing. Just amazing. Your writing style is very unique, and I could just picture all of this. It's very beautiful. Good job!

This is really good, you should write more stories. If you do please tell me. :)

Wow.

Where to begin. Well, this story is amazing. I loved it.

Seeing as it is your first, it wasn't that bad...it was actually quite amazing that it was your first. I love the words you used to describe the graveyard...I could picture myself walking through the graveyard with her...Idk. It was amazing...

I loved the storyline also. I could see through your writing exactly what was going on, and I actually felt the emotions. I dont really know how to explain it, but as you mentioned the emotions flickering through her and his eyes, I felt as though I understood exactly what both were going through..

It's a little rough in some parts, especially at the beginning, but still, overall it was wonderfully written lovely. You captured my attention, and then sort of pulled me in. I loved the ending :]]

Ahh I lovedd it. Write more soon pretty please?

Howdy Y'all! This was my first story! hoped you liked it!