that was cute. I really like the ending. I really liked the story..and the prequel. and guess what? I've already subscribed to your new story :) I'm excited!
omg! I thought Leila was going to get kidnapped or killed or something but that was really cute all the stuff Josh did for her. Like keeping her warm and holding her so she wouldn't be scared. absolutely adorable :)
you really shouldn't bash your chapters, they are actually pretty good. just thought you should know :) now for the actual chapter... is she in love? are they falling for each other???? I need to know!! lol
I really really loved how it ended.
Though, she kinda reacted like she was still pregnant P
Loved it.
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