Somehwere Between Hell and Zombies - Comments

Good story!! Really good I was enraptured, I only saw one tiny tiny teenie error that no one else noticed because I am slightly OCD in the last chapter "you probably want to no what we look like..." It is KNOW not NO. What you could do is describe the yellowish glint that enters the zombies eyes as they spy thier next victim. Or describe their move like that of feral animals of the most primal instinct. I mean the story is really awesome super good keep it up.:)

Ohhhhh, this one's almost as awesome as your other one!!!! I absolutely loved it, but I think maybe you should slow it down a little more, you know, to drag it out and get more readers and stuff. I think that would definately make it more interesting!! But other than that, it is amazing!!! I love the awesome way you have at describing things, because it's just sooo.......awesome!! Update soon?!!

ewwwww poor doggie

i clap for your amazingly long chapter

u got some spelling bloopers, they have to be corrected or the mibba people send you a warning saying fix it or say byebye to your story...i got one.

if life gives u lemons put the juice in a water gun and squirt other pople in the eyes

fun fun oooooh kidnap?