I really, really hope this isn't the story that you said "you forgot how it goes", because it's amazing. Hook, line and sinker, I need to know what happens next!!!
I've just began reading it, read it the whole way through actually, and I love it. It's different in a specific fashion. Your use of language is beyond comparison, and your articulation is admirable. I encourage the continuation for such writing; the site, and world, needs a little bit more of it.
That sounded odd...What I meant is that I love the story and the way you've written it. Keep it up, kid. (:
i really like it .. and the song is by hush sound. the boys are too refined. and, if im not mistaken the album is the new one...good bye blues? yeah.. i think thats it.
Because I really like it.
And I want to see what happens.
Update please?